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What Not to Write (on bar exam) by Tania N. Shah and Melissa A. Gill: book review

12 May 2011

The bar exam has many recent law school graduates anxious and befuddled, but before you become unglued, pick up this nifty book by Tania N. Shah and Melissa A. Gill entilted What NOT to Write. This writer was asked to review this book and given a copy, and was delightfully surprised by how easy it was to read what can otherwise be viewed as very dense material.

This particular edition is geared toward the Massachusetts Bar Exam, but New York is also available (review to come), along with an edition for the California Bar Exam.

The book includes “real essays, real scores, real feedback.” It begins with an introduction to the Massachusetts Bar Exam—the format, tested areas, how it’s graded, and even includes a section on how to effectively answer the essay questions. The latter is essentially the “meat” of the book: reading the fact pattern(s), outlining, and writing the essay answer, along with specific time-management strategies. Name of the game? Spot the issues!

The book explains that the Massachusetts bar essay exam consists of 10 questions, and examinees have six hours in which to answer: three hours in the morning for fact patterns 1 through 5, and three hours in the afternoon for fact patterns 6 through 10 (no wonder this author witnessed Texas bar examinees after the bar exam last summer walking around dazed as if in a war zone!).

Shah and Gill remind readers, therefore, that examinees must, in the space of 36 minutes for each question, “(a) read a fact pattern one- or two-typed pages long, and (b) construct a three- to four-page [cogent] written answer to that question.”


The book is then conveniently divided into sections for the different topics bar examinees will find on the exam: torts, constitutional law, evidence, secured transactions, property, criminal procedure, and many more—nineteen actual questions (i.e. fact patterns) are included. Readers can therefore start from the beginning, or move immediately to an area of interest (or concern!).

Remember these are actual bar exam essay questions with actual bar exam answers, which begin with the highest ranked, at score 7, to the lowest ranked, at score 1. Following each actual bar exam answer is an area for your own notes or answers, comparison notes, and the authors’ analysis. Their comments range from the general such as “the examiners have to read thousands of essays, and the quicker and more succinctly that you can demonstrate your knowledge of the law, as well as the ability to apply it, the better” (16), to the specific, such as “give the general law, and THEN the specific law…it is always best to start with your black-letter law…you will not get a 7 if you do not apply the law” (20). [Emphasis mine.]

Other great tips from the authors include:

  • “You always want to include a statement of governing law so your grader knows exactly what area of law you are going to talk about.” (27)
  • “Always raise the claim, THEN the defense.” (49)
  • “The MOST important part of a bar exam essay is the analysis because it lets the bar examiners know you are proficient in practicing law, not merely memorizing rules and coming up with a lucky guess for a conclusion. Anyone can memorize rules of law, but it takes a lawyer to know what to do with them.” (54) [Emphasis mine.]

The book was a collaboration between LawTutors’ President Tania N. Shah and Vice President Melissa A. Gill, not to mention those fearless bar candidates who selflessly shared their actual bar exam answers so the rest of us might learn from their successes or mistakes.

LawTutors is, according to its website, “a radically innovative, personalized system that ensures constant support, mentoring, contacts and confidence. You will study smarter, not longer, by having an individual Attorney Instructor custom design a study program built solely around you, focusing your efforts precisely on those areas you need to study.” You can read more about LawTutors, sign up for their newsletter, or even peruse free articles such as “How to Study for Exams.”

When Ms. Shah was asked why law students might benefit from LawTutors, she responded:

“LawTutors takes into account the fact that all students do not learn the same way: some are visual, some are audio, some learn by examples, others by analogies. The list goes on, yet sometimes students feel forced into a learning style that does not fit them, and they are made to feel that they somehow ‘don’t get it.’ We want them to know- they wouldn’t be in law school if they didn’t have the capacity to ‘get it.’ It is just that we all ‘get it’ in different ways, and the way each student learns should be maximized rather than thwarted.”

This writer also queried LawTutors’ Vice President Melissa Gill as to why law students might need this book. She replied:

“Students are often faced with unobtainable sample answers when looking through most essay books, wondering how they can possibly write that much in the allotted time, or spot that many issues. Our book gives students a look at what actual bar takers write in the allotted time, and what the bar exam graders scored those essays. Our book shows students what IS obtainable in the allotted time, and guides them through how to get there!

As for LawTutors, it is different because it gives both law students and bar students an opportunity to work one on one with an experienced tutor, and depending on learning style, some students need that individualized feedback. We also focus on HOW to study, so that students build the necessary skills to study on their own.”

After reading this neat little book, Massachusetts bar candidates can confidently say “Bring it on Massachusetts!”  (This writer strongly believes that even other states’ bar candidates would benefit from reading this book.)

For more info: You can read more about the LawTutors team here.

To order the book, visit the LawTutors’ site at or visit the publisher’s site here.

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Sami K. Hartsfield, ACP is a freelance writer and paralegal in Houston. She holds a degree in paralegal studies with a 4.0 GPA and a bachelor of science degree in political science, graduating summa cum laude. Sami interned with Texas’ 14th Court of Appeals under Chief Justice Adele Hedges, and completed the University of Houston Law Center’s Summer 2008 Prelaw Institute. She is preparing to enter law school in the fall and holds a national advanced paralegal certification as well as six specialty certifications: Discovery; Trial Practice; Contracts Management; Individual & Entity Medical Liability; and Social Security Disability Law. You can find her on Facebook and e-mail her with questions, comments, or ideas at

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  1. Keep up the good work on this blog!

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